100WC Week#14 by Joe

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Posted by Joe | Posted in General News | Posted on 05-01-2018

Today was the worst day I have ever had! It all began when I ate the delicious banana from the fridge and my furry grey body was roaring like a lion with hunger. I quickly swung from chair to chair to get my computer. With all my ‘smarticles’, I got on to the web and searched ‘bananas’. I immediately ordered them but not realising I ordered 1000 . £100! I don’t have that much. Anger flew up my body! Ooaa ooaa! I rapidly pushed the computer off the table. Bang! SMASH!! Glass shattered everywhere. I was the angriest monkey that ever lived…

Comments (4)

That was amazing! That piece of writing was very funny .The best part was when you said” anger flew up my body “.

well done Joe i really liked the ellipsis at the end 🙂
and the onomatopoeia hopefully you can make showcase of the week on the 100WC website

wow Joe! Great work. Loved how the monkey buys 1000 bananas! :]

How joe that was funny that should becom a book

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